A Promise to Keep
Here's a little story that I got sidetracked on. I know, I know, I have other things I should be writing , but this had been annoying me for the past few days. So now maybe I can get on with my other...
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You have written a very dark tale for us. Here we see the Courageous Barkley brothers enduring a gruesome ordeal, and both dealing with it in their own way. Powerful writing, Amy.
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Felt like I was right there with the brothers. Heath's promise brought chills, knowing what's to come. Great job!!
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Oh my! What a twist at the end. What was going to happen to Nick? Was HE going to the sweatbox? What a SUPER story!
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Great writing, Amy! I love how the brothers used the strength of each other to face that ordeal!
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Great job on this heartrending scene, Amy! You've made the Barkley boys' anguish both felt and seen with your words.
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Nick placed a hand on Heaths chest, feeling comfort in the steady rise and fall underneath his hand. Heath would make it. He had to. Nick wondered where Jarrod was right now; he pictured a map of the...
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I'm always up for another take on this episode which is one of my favorites. You did a great job with filling the gaps between the whipping and the box. Debbie
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Oh wow! Knowing what happens next makes this a very sad story. But I loved it just the same. you're a really fantastic writer.
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writing Amy. There was always so much more the writers could have done with this episode. The brother's together make a heartwrenching scene as did Heath's promise.Do we get another chapter? Please??
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Boy, this was really well written. Loved Nick's thoughts and actions, and you even got Jarrod in there! You captured the 'boys' beautifully as well as their emotions. Hope we see more from you
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Wow!!! That was super! I loved the Nick and Heath's interaction...the love and caring of these brothers was wonderful!
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Gotta love those brothers----one leaning and one supporting, one promising and one asking. Good job filling in the gaps the episode left us with!
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What a fabulous interlude - would love to see what you could do with an epilogue - when Heath is pulled from the box. You have truly captured the brother's love, and Nick's desperation, in this well...
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and a story that is very well told! I really enjoyed seeing Nick and Heath with each other in this moving episode. Wonderful job!! I loved it! Christy
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Errrg! This is SO frustrating. Going back to read something a second time because I liked it so well (knowing that, because it's blue highlighted) and realizing that I got interrupted and didn't...
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